Writing Commons Two: Marissa's Cinquain

Wednesday, May 05, 2010

Holding
Carefully
Inside my heart
Your three little words
To keep me company
Until we meet again, love

At 5:52 PM, Dalicia said...: This is very pretty. I especially like the two possible meanings of "love" as your last word, either as a salutation or as a pronoun.
At 10:22 PM, zhasmene said...: I agree with the thought that "love" has more than one meaning. I think it can also be interpreted as a noun. As in: "Until we meet again. . . (there will be) Love."
At 7:17 PM, Leebers said...: My favorite line is the 'three little words' part. It flows very nicely, and it leads into the last line with 'love' as the end of the poem (I assume you mean "I love you" as the three little words)