Lee's Cinquain
Walking
Slowly
In step
Two left feet
To lead me on
Before I trip and fall
posted by Leebers @ 10:55 AM
2 comments
Walking
posted by Leebers @ 10:55 AM
2 comments
2 Comments:
I like the paradox in this between "in step" and "two left feet," one suggesting rhythm and the other awkwardness. It makes me think of a baby just learning to walk.
I also like the rhythm of the syllables, especially that they don't exactly increase with each subsequent line. It creates a sense of hesitation that is matched by the topic of the poem.
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