Sleep
Sleep
Dream
Under blankets
Over and over
The clock strikes 12 again
Another day is soon gone
posted by D. Dixon @ 8:08 PM
1 comments
Friday, May 09, 2008
Dream
Under blankets
Over and over
The clock strikes 12 again
Another day is soon gone
1 Comments:
I think that this is a great poem, but I'm not sure that you have the right format. The first line of the poem should be an adverb and the third line should be a noun phrase. I’m not sure that your two lines fit the requirement. Other than that, it looks really good!
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