Running
Running
Steady
Each morning
Before you wake
To clear my busy mind
So I can start the day refreshed
Edit:
Running
Strongly
Each morning
Before you wak
To clear my busy mind
So I can start the day refreshed
posted by Anonymous @ 9:27 AM
3 comments
3 Comments:
this is a good cinquain but the only thing is that i am not sure if steady is an adverb. I believe that it is an adjective.
I think this is a great cinquain. I have to agree on the "steady" observation, though. Perhaps it should be "steadily"? That does mess up the syllabic pattern of the piece, though.
Steady is an adjective. Steadily is an adverb. Other than that I like your cinquain.
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