Drew's Cinquain
Drumming
Noisily
With great fervor
Each and every day
To realize a childhood dream
Before reality strips it away
I think I followed Kolln's pattern correctly: adverb, prepositional phrase, noun phrase, infinitive verb phrase, and dependent clause. I also count 3, 4, 5, 8, and 10 syllables, although I am not sure about line three (I count every as 2 syllables, but I think it could also be counted as 1).
posted by Drew @ 8:36 PM
4 comments
4 Comments:
Nice work. I count "every" as two syllables too.
I like this. And I agree on the "every" syllable count.
You do follow the pattern. I especially like the last two lines.
"every" has two syllables. You can look up any word up in dictionary.com and the dots in between the letters tell you how many syllables it has.
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