Wednesday, May 24, 2006

A cinquain that is mine

Unnerving

Quite
At night
A small fright
To cause a fight
Although I've no spite

*I am not sure about the adverb "quite" here as it is modifying a preposition (but I used it anyways because poetry often bends/breaks the rules of grammar). Suggestions on anything would be much appreciated.

1 Comments:

At 10:06 PM, Blogger Vicki TB said...

I actually think "quite" modifies the title and works quite well. --vtb

 

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