Saturday, May 20, 2006

My Cinquain

I chose to write a cinquain using the "sleeping" title. I hope it makes sense and is written correctly. I placed the number of syllables that I counted in each line in parantheses. If you find anything wrong with my cinquain or have any suggestions let me know!!

Sleeping
alone (2)
in my bed (3)
every single night (5-6: depending on how you pronounce "every")
to rest my aching body (7)
while my mind wanders through a land of dreams (10)

1 Comments:

At 7:13 PM, Blogger RachelP said...

This is very good. My one suggestion is that it seems like your last line modifies the one before it, and not necessarily "sleeping."

 

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