Writing Commons Two: Cinquain

Tuesday, May 06, 2008

Meditating
Always
For peace
mountain peaks
to climb and stand
On top of the earth

At 1:00 PM, Tami said...: Good job on your cinquain. It is very creative and conveys the peace filled emotion meditating brings in just a few short phrases.
At 7:26 PM, Zac said...: I like it. It is very poetic, and something that is hard to do within such tight constraints.
At 11:01 PM, Mikala said...: I thought that you did a great job. I'm in a yoga class this term and this poem reminds me of my class. It has a very peacful flow and meaning to it. Nice work